Who By Fire?
My forty-first dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena and my final entry for the Vocal Quadru-Haiku Challenge

This is my forty-first dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena.
This is my final entry for the Vocal Quadru-Haiku Challenge which you can read about below.
The main criteria are here
Write haiku inspired by any or all of the four elements: earth, water, air, fire.
My friend Lee also told me that the seasons should be implied rather than named, so I will try and apply that concept in these four haiku.
You can read my first entry by following the link at the end of this which also provides a fuller definition of the requirements for haiku.
The music I have chosen is "Who By Fire?" by Leonard Cohen which also provided inspiration for this piece from the sadly missed poet and performer.
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Bright Flowers Blooming
To Mark Your Vicious Drowning
In A Water Butt
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Then Burned By Hot Fire
Heat Of The Sun Charred Your Skin
A Blackened Carcass
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Brown Leaves Are Falling
Covering Your Grave Interred
Under The Dug Earth
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Suffocated By
Lack Of Air In Your Freezing
Final Place Of Rest
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This was brilliance at its finest!
Good one.
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