The Tar Pit
Free Write & Unfiltered Thoughts 4/10/26

Frozen in space as time moves around her,
like a glacier constantly fed but never melted.
Stuck to the fear, thick as molasses;
she waits for the world to still -
to calm the chaos in her soul,
but everyday the tar pit deepens
and the vultures continue to circle with patience,
sipping from their glacial spring glasses
in false horror.
She reaches out, hands stained black,
wanting to reach the sun beyond the ruined clouds,
the pinnacle of life -
desperate for the relief that warmth could bring
to the humanity sinking around her.
But this space refuses to budge,
and time continues to fling itself forward;
oblivious to those frozen on the ground,
so she must endure.
We all must endure.
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Author's Note:
The world feels more chaotic than it ever has, and it's a genuine hellscape for far too many. Injustice has been left to fester, humanity has been left to sink, and yet we the people remain while those in power gamble with our lives.
So let's remind ourselves why we must endure. For a better tomorrow, for a future where stories reveal the truths of the common man, for the people who scream but whose voices are not heard.
Be their voice.
About the Creator
Amanda Starks
Epic fantasy writer, poet, and hopefully soon-to-be novelist who wants to create safe spaces to talk about mental health. Magic, swords, and monsters abound!
You can check out my website here!
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Comments (3)
This is amazing. I loved it. Endurance is the battle, but one we must fight.
Fuck yeah. Felt this in my soul. Wasn't even quick enough to read it before the rightly awarded it a Top Story. You keep bettering your skills. Well done on this.
Beautiful free write and amen to the authors note!