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How You Open My Senses

By Mariann CarrollPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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Photo by Birmingham Museums Trust on Unsplash

Looking At You, Open the gates of my senses

I smell the fresh paint of a sexual atmosphere

The taste of sweat is very salty to my tongue

Your skin all wet from overwork exhaustion

I hear your gulps of pure delight from my sexual touch

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About the Creator

Mariann Carroll

Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.

Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .

fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living

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  • Testabout a year ago

    well done

  • Grz Colmabout a year ago

    Oh my! I need to put the fan on lol! 😆😁

  • Chloe Gilholy2 years ago

    Very intimate and intense.

  • Oooo, that was so hot ans intimate! So happy to read a new poem from you!

  • JBaz2 years ago

    Ohhh, now this has some heat to it. Nicely done

  • Tiffany Gordon2 years ago

    😱🔥

  • A sensual experience indeed. Love the featured image too. Well done

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