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Don't Leave

Take Me Back...

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published about 8 hours ago 1 min read
Don't Leave
Photo by Mantas Hesthaven on Unsplash


Take me back,
To the day,
When you said
"I LOVE YOU"
When you held my hand,
And I suppressed the tears weld up
In my eyes...
Take me back to the moment,
When you held my heart in your hands...
My pride smiled,
When you cried...
I layed my head on your shoulder,
I was thinking something only you would know...
I whispered "Kiss Me"
And with our last smooch,
I didn't want to let go...
You cried and I tried to comfort your pain, when I Lifed your head,
I seen the tears in your eyes...
My pride was washed to the side,
I didn't want to go,
But I had to leave...
Take me back to the day,
When I couldn't breathe-
When you said,
You Love Me...

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

“ Public Diary, of an Urban LGBTQ Poet

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  • Paul Aaron Domenickabout 2 hours ago

    How heartfelt and sweet.

  • Tiffany Gordonabout 3 hours ago

    Breathtaking! 😱 Go King Go! 👑

  • Mark Grahamabout 8 hours ago

    You brought tears to my eyes with this one. I think we all have days like this. Good job.

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