College Migration
a haiku
Photo by Jeff Warner on Unsplash
brown needles on the
veranda, the last goodbye
before the great wild
About the Creator
Justin Keeling
A systems thinker dedicated to the task of disillusioning and reconciling a fragmented world through art, design, music, and story.
I sing for the dryads who spring through city sidewalks.
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Comments (2)
Really loved “Boxer” and appreciating using an adjective for “…The Wild” as if it needed one…ha. Inspired to start a list and see where it leads…hopefully no where tame. Thanks for sharing and have a blessed weekend.
Wooohooooo congratulations on your honourable mention! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊